(need stronger nut graph; disorganized on top; more information about danger associated with unclear sidewalks; more info on warning process; rule on foreclosed properties? more details on the actual workload in a day; more on the logistics? more from other properties owners; more critical voice; budget cut impact.
— Headline ideas?
Shovel or pay the price
Pedestrians troubled by poor walkway upkeep
Walking on broken ice
Sidewalk complaints accumulating
Clear the ice
— Photos?
— Before and after
— inspectors on the job
— Photo of the complaint
— Photo of foreclosed house
— Multimedia possibilities?
— interactive map
— audio slideshow of inspectors showing what warrants fines
— video shadowing one of the inspectors
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